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Tongariro River
New Zealand
Big trout in a big river

Renowned for its abundant trout population, New Zealand’s Tongariro River is a prime destination for fly fishers. The river is home to both brown and rainbow trout, which grow to impressive sizes, particularly during spawning runs. Popular fishing spots like the Bridge Pool and Major Jones cater to anglers of all skill levels.

Tongariro River

Fish Species
While other species may inhabit the area, this section highlights the primary catches:

  • Brown Trout
  • Rainbow Trout

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