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Valtellina (Italian Alps), Italy

Hundreds of mountain streams and lakes dot the Italian Alps.

Valtellina boasts 110 alpine lakes, 220 mountain streams, and 24 reservoirs, offering 1,250 kilometers of fishable water. This makes it an ideal fly-fishing destination—you could spend weeks here without exhausting all the fishing opportunities. Located north/northeast of Lake Como, the valley is also perfect for combining fishing with a holiday.

Valtellina (Italian Alps)

Species
While more species may inhabit the area, this page highlights the following:

  • Brown Trout
  • Grayling
  • Rainbow Trout

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