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Salmon on the River Tay
United Kingdom | Scotland’s Largest Salmon River
The River Tay, Scotland’s largest salmon river, is renowned for its big fish. Thanks to its unique, loch-fed headwater catchment, the Tay offers the most reliable and consistently stable fishing conditions in Scotland.
The salmon fishing season runs from 15th January to 15th October, with the best periods being March–May (Spring) and September–October (Autumn).
Our guided River Tay salmon fishing service includes:
- Permits (licenses)
- Professional guide
- Tactical fine-tuning
- All necessary salmon fishing equipment
We also provide seasonal salmon fly patterns tailored to prevailing water and temperature conditions.
Fish Species
Note: While other species may be present, this page focuses on the following:
- Atlantic Salmon
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