L’Ellé de Barrégant

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L’Elle de Barrégant
France

A stunning small stream ideal for lower aftma classes, offering brown trout.

From the chapel, descend to the river and soon find yourself in an idyllic setting. The stream presents a challenge due to submerged boulders and overhanging branches.

You’ll primarily encounter small trout here. A riverside path allows for easy exploration.

Fish Species

While other species may inhabit the area, this description focuses on:

• Brown Trout

For more details: https://www.parcours-de-peche-morbihan.fr/carte-peche/l-elle-de-barregant-a-grand-pont

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