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Evening Rise Fly Fishing – New Zealand

Welcome to Your Ultimate Fly Fishing Adventure
Embark on an unforgettable fly fishing experience in the breathtaking Southland and Otago regions of New Zealand. Whether you’re looking for a quick escape, a serene day on the water, or a multi-day expedition, I’ll tailor your trip to create memories that last a lifetime.

Meet Your Guide: Mike Dennis
A true New Zealand native, I discovered my passion for fly fishing at age 10, starting with eels on hand-lines and graduating to my first trout on a fly rod. Over the past 25 years, I’ve honed my skills across New Zealand’s pristine waters, as well as in the Cook Islands, Southeast Asia, Australia, and Canada’s Pacific Northwest. As a seasoned guide in Southland (New Zealand’s "Home of Brown Trout") and Otago, I offer unparalleled local knowledge and expertise.

Why Choose Evening Rise Fly Fishing?

Evening Rise Fly Fishing

  • Expert Guidance: Whether you’re a beginner or an advanced angler, I provide personalized instruction on gear setup, knot tying, casting techniques, and fly selection.
  • Stunning Locations: Fish in crystal-clear waters surrounded by breathtaking landscapes, with opportunities for sight fishing rising trout.
  • Unique Adventures: For thrill-seekers, try night fishing along lake edges and stream mouths—prime spots where trophy-sized trout lurk. Imagine casting a mouse pattern or streamer under a starry sky, waiting for the "Big Boys" to strike.

Your Safety Comes First
Your well-being is my top priority. I hold a First Aid Field Qualification and serve as an Operational Team Member of the Search and Rescue Organization. As a proud member of the New Zealand Professional Fishing Guides Association, I operate with full concessions, ensuring a safe and professional experience.

Target Species
Specializing in:

  • Brown Trout
  • Rainbow Trout

Book Your Adventure Today!
Explore New Zealand’s legendary lakes, rivers, and streams—home to some of the world’s finest trout fishing. Contact me now to secure your spot and turn your angling dreams into reality.

Available Services:
✔ Guided fly fishing trips
✔ Expert tuition for all skill levels
✔ Day trips & multi-day expeditions
✔ Adventurous night fishing (seasonal)

Let’s make your next fishing adventure extraordinary!


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